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by Gary E. Andrews - 10/19/26 09:48 PM
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Hi Dottie I like the hook, it's a good one. However I think you should save it for the end of the chorus only. I reckon it would hit home better. Having it at the start of the chorus lessens the impact for me. This song is about the truth. So in simple terms if the question were where is the truth? the answer would be beneath alibis. So if you make your chorus abouth the truth it could begin it with something like "Somewhere it lies" ('it' being the truth) then the end of your chorus will spell it out with The truth you were hiding
Beneath alibisJust a few thoughts  Nige
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