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Hey Paul: I don't mind nits at all - I made about 8 changes to this based on nits given when I posted it in the lyrics forum. All of them made it stronger imo. On the line in question - I actually went back and forth between the way I have it and the exact line you proposed. What finally drove me in the direction I did was "screams of my brothers". I simply could not sing that line convincingly. If I tried to sing it so the words were clear, it sounded like I was teaching a phonics lesson. I dunno what it was - too many m's and b's in close proximity or something. I kept getting tripped up.  I'm sure someone else could sing it that way - if it ever comes to that, I'll give them the option. Thanks Paul! Scott
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