Hi Scott,

Great job as usual. I had seen a documentary or special on this maybe PBS or history channel where it talked about how the Airzona is leaking fuel on a daily basis (almost like she's shedding tears) but anyway it was/is causing a real environmental threat to the underwater life, etc so they are discussing what steps need to be taken to address the problem.

I think it's great to keep history alive especially through a song. We have a couple Pearl Harbor movies and it's such a shocker when the guys are on deck in the early am raising the flag and having their little ceremony and out of no where comes the enemy planes and they are so caught off guard thinking initially they were US planes.

My only thought was and it might be need to just see if it works, would be at your bridge/refrain part try singing the song without pauses between the lines and just have each line go right into the other. You have pauses throughout the whole rest of the song and this would speed up that part but also give it more contrast there to set it apart more as a bridge.

Thanks for sharing and caring enough about the subject to write about it. (and write well)

Best,
Lynn smile

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