Originally Posted by MATT STONEHAM
Hi Scott,

A lot of good things going on here, but the way you sing The Hook

with seven Syllables spoils it for me I'm sure you could lengthen that line via other words, keeping the same melody.

No one would speak the word Arizona that way and that makes the song sort of unreal. alter that and you have a good song.


Hi Matt:

Thanks for weighing in. That part you don't like actually appeals to me. But then it would or I wouldn't have done it. smile

I'm probably going to keep it. Tell you what though - if I'm pushing this and someone makes that same comment to me, I'll come back here and give you credit for catching it. smile

Thanks, man!

Scott