Hi Scott,

Your such a good writer. This reads well, on the page, and sings in an honest yet heart rending way.

This is so masterfully detailed, I really feel like I know this 93 year old man, by songs end.

I need to mention the excellent phrasing of lines like "Watching your wife grow more beautiful with each year" you know how to use that all important space, before the phrases first downbeat, to sneak in "watching your" --so the long line sounds completely natural.

My highest praise for this. Every bit of me, moved by this.

Oh, maybe throw more reverb on the "string synth" and maybe even flange it, so it 's "wider" in the stereo spectrum. smile

Mike


Fate doesn't hang on a wrong or right choice
Fortune depends on the tone of your voice

-The Divine Comedy (Neil Hannon)
from the song "Songs of Love"
from the album "Casanova" (1996)