HiDee Mzs Sharla & Janet!

Great Job!/Fine Hook!

I'll proofread & Sug-Away...K-O-S My LadyChums..as I go!

"trailor" is spelled "trailer".
"..the girl's gonna rise" needs that Apostrophe...
"labEled a failure.."
"..by her parents' greed" (Apostrophe/greed is usually Singular.)

Absolutely GREAT Bridge, Gals!!! (I'd Sug "weary" insteada "worn-out" Social Worker.) (& ..."makING sure nobody hurt her")

V3 Last Line Sug: "This time when they call her name...EVERYBODY STANDS"

Might could ADD one more "-TION" Line at the Tail:
"They're gonna rise 'cause she had such DEDICATION"...
(Then That Last Line, perhaps Sung-Softer?)
..."another girl's" needs an Apostrophe too...(Possesive Noun.)

All Outta Nits & Sugs, K-O-S, & Believe Me..This One's GREAT!

Best Wishes & Big CONGRATS, Gals!!!
Stan