It's pretty well-written, I really like some of your rhymes. One thing this song needs IMO is to whittle it down. There are many places in here where you can whack out one to three words in a line and it will sing BETTER than it currently does. Especially words like the and various prepositions. Less is more. Everything won't sound so jammed in. It's a common thing we all fight but it has to be done. I've taken what I thought was a totally finished lyric and by time I got through with it, I was amazed at how much better it was after a whack job.

The thing you fight here is that there are songs with this very theme. I guess what is different is that this person actually became a judge, so, that's a new angle. But I think the lyric might have missed something crucial -- if it were me, I would work in the word "judge" into this story. As a noun and as a verb. Good luck!