Great, great song. The story is build up carefully and it's a whole lotta story for just one song! The chorus seems to rise itself so music and lyrics harmonize very well. Sharla's voice is breath-taking in this one.

Just one little thing - the ending sounded kinda abrupt to me. Maybe it's that the song ends with the word "rise" which always makes you - well maybe only me - expect something else to come. Just a thought. :-)

Anyway - great job!!!


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