I love the story, the rhymes, the lyrics, the music, the message, and the hope conveyed. Clever how you bring it all full circle. Wondering if in the last line where you have:

THEY'RE GONNA RISE, CAUSE SHE'S REACHED HER DESTINATION
THEY'RE GONNA RISE, CAUSE SHE'S EARNED APRRECIATION,

If instead of "appreciation" possibly:

They're gonna rise, cause she's earned her reputation smile

Their really not standing in appreciation of the Judge but as a result of her authority in the courtroom, hence her reputation as a Judge.

We do wind up earning our reputation, good or bad.

This is prime for a complentary music video.

I also think if you reach the high notes go even higher in your chorus 3rd Line, first part "she's gonna' rise rise"
on the "she's gonna rise rise (3d line first part of Chorus)

Great work. I'm impressed.

Best,
Lynn smile


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