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by Gary E. Andrews - 10/19/26 09:48 PM
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Hey, thanks to Redwing (Janet) for bringing this to my attention; glad I got to take a listen tonight! Here's my feedback - I always try to find critiques even when I like the song (which I do!): * Nice clear-sounding worktape, clear vocals/words * Room to take this more up-tempo * Room to make the chorus melody bigger, with peaks on RISE * "Greeds" - Feel like this rhyme got forced, might be worth grinding this out for as long as it takes to keep the meaning but find a better rhyme without the bad grammar. * Clear, compelling story, nice pairing of the title and concept!! Nice work, sounds like a great soundtrack song right now. I can easily envision this getting some tempo and a bigger chorus melody to take it into Carrie Underwood territory.  Nice work, maybe squeeze more juice out of it and make it a timeless classic..! -Ethan
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