Hey Ande,

Listenable enough tune. Great lyrics !

I'm not too sure about the backing here. It's very predictable, 1 4 5 with the odd realitive minor thrown in. When I can predict where it's heading, then it kind of takes the interest away. It also makes the track sound dated, in a "dated" rather than retro way. I'm probably offending someone here, but I think it needs a fresh musical approach.

cheers, niteshift