Hi Kevin

thanks for commenting
we wrote this song 6 or 7 years ago
then my cowriter recently demoed it

on the lyric, I came up with the hook
donna and I wrote the lyric then brock did the melody

Originally Posted by Kevin Emmrich
Ande,

I don't know about this one. I've listened to both the demo and Brock's original version. I really like Brock's version, the produced one seems just a little over-done. I find the lyrics on the weak side -- which surprises me. But I realize that you might have come along late to this one.

I've been on this thread about 5 times, but I couldn't bring myself to comment -- it's tough to comment on a full demo that was paid for and of course, you've been doing this a lot longer than me.

I found Brock's version easier to listen to all the way through!!

Kevin

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