Ande, the demo has top-notch expensive production. the lyric, though is really, really weak esp. that second verse. I'm being honest here...that second verse is painful. you may be relying on production to make your song.


Nashville demos etc:

https://www.soundclick.com/bands3/default.cfm?bandID=431939

other demos:

https://soundcloud.com/wabash-cannibal

Amazon Kindle books by Robert George you may enjoy:

1) Americana

2) Teenage Graceland

3) The Will to Be

4) Fort Mystery

5) Wheel Sea

6) My One True Love