hi joice,

hope your wrting is going well

thanks for your suggestions

I think the lyric needs to stay focused on the beautiful woman who is hotter than the hinges on the gates of hell

ande

Originally Posted by Joice Marie
Hi Again Ande

Just some thoughts here to prime the pumps...... take or leave, okay smile jm

The bartender’s blender is spinning red tonight
Doing all I can, to be cool under these hot lights
Your come on looks from the corner
Keep on making me warmer
And I can feel the heat from your fiery eyes

CHORUS
YOU’RE HOTTER THAN THE HINGES ON THE GATES OF HELL
Your're fanning my furnace, I'm ABOUT TO MELT
MY TEMPERATURE’S RISIN’, AIN’T TOO SURPRISIN’
GOTTA add some ice ‘FORE I MAKE A FOOL OF MYSELF
YOU’RE HOTTER THAN THE HINGES ON THE GATES OF HELL

Feel like I’m the mixer for an exotic drink
You slide a bit closer as the ice starts to clink
Well I got a li’tle notion
You’ve set into motion
My eyes are on you, your smoke makes me blink


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