thank you mark
hope your writing is going great

ande

Originally Posted by Mark Schuessler
Ande:

There are a lot of things to love about this song:

1. Great concept.
2. Great hook.
3. Excellent use of images of "hot" and "cool".
4. The melody of the song in general is catchy, smooth, singable and fun.
5. A lot of the lyrics are nicely crafted...good use of alliteration (i.e. Your come on looks from the corner...Keep on...) It doesn't call attention to itself but it sure makes the song "feel" good (especially if you're singing along.)
6. Great title.
7. Great first line.

I thought the lyrics in the second verse were not up to the standard of the rest of the song...except the last line, which was excellent.

I really enjoyed the original guitar demo, but that may be because it was my second listen and good songs seem to sound better the more you listen to them.

Mark

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