Hi Scott,

I haven't posted for a while, but was stopping in and took a listen.

Very nice feeling to this. To me this had a nice Irish street pop feel to it, if there is such a thing. I think it has potential as the hook is very good, but it does need further melodic development IMO. As I read the lyric it seems the chorus works, but the verses aren't grabbing me on the gut level, again IMO.

The production I heard in my head was simple beginning that continues to build as new voices and instruments come in with maybe an a cappella chorus break - that may or may not make any sense.

Anyway just my rambling thoughts. Great work and effort as always. The force is is strong in you, young Skywalker. (Ha, sorry couldn't resist) Wish you the best.

Pete