Originally Posted by niteshift
It's got a great feel to it, but listening to your previous work, it somehow misses the mark.

It has some great moments, but I feel you're just going through the motions, trying to create feeling, rather than expressing it naturally in a way which you have a natural ability.

Scott, you probably think I'm being tough, but I'm not going to say "work it up". You have more depth.

Whoa, that was hard, but you know I have a great deal of respect for you as a writer. I know you'll take my opinion as only one of many. Onto the next one.....

cheers, Geoff



LOL - no worries, Geoff grin

Definitely not my normal thing - in fact I was actively trying to create a song more based on feeling than imagery....

No problem that it doesn't work for you - nothing will work for everybody - ok except maybe the Beatles grin

Will probably get back more to the other kind of stuff soon - I'll find out when the muse shows up next ... She's been pretty sporatic lately

Appreciate the honest review - If I believe someone when they say they don't like something then I also have to believe them when they say they do!

See ya,
Scott

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