Originally Posted by Moosesong
This is a beautiful song and the harmonies are great. I agree with earlier comment of some of the lines have sylables that don't quite fit the beats of the melody.

This song is worth the effort to polish it up. It's wonderful.


Thanks, Moose!

I think mostly its the "Sunny you always said that we were the perfect blend" line - that does have an emphasis in some odd places. I'll try to come up with an alternative.

Love your avatar grin

Scott