Hey Scott,

Yep, it's definitely got your trademark upon it.

It's got a great feel to it, but listening to your previous work, it somehow misses the mark.

It has some great moments, but I feel you're just going through the motions, trying to create feeling, rather than expressing it naturally in a way which you have a natural ability.

Scott, you probably think I'm being tough, but I'm not going to say "work it up". You have more depth.

Whoa, that was hard, but you know I have a great deal of respect for you as a writer. I know you'll take my opinion as only one of many. Onto the next one.....

cheers, Geoff