Bro Couch, you DID hit the Nail On Da Head: "This is a Critique Board".

So far, as I scroll backwards, I find YOU and Harriet (She's as Clique-Member-y as ANY of us get, BTW) don't like My Lyric here.

And, I find it's been FAVORABLY-Commented Upon..by Beth, John, Derek, Brenda, and Lyle. John V's about the ONLY JPF Member from Years-Back (Makin' him a Potential "Clique-member") but the REST are Relative New-Comers.

So..even counting Le Grande Toi, that makes 2-"Opposed", 5-"For"
(It'd be 6..IF I counted Myself..tho who needs to?)

You keep making the Fallacious Assumption that YOU & Your Opinions constitute "A Board", and that YOUR Version of Songwriting is Infinitely-Superior to ALL us "Lesser Writers".
(And ANYONE who's Opposed to YOUR VIEWS Must Certainly be part of a Conspiratorial Clique....)

But Buddy, NUMBERS Don't Lie. Scroll Back a-ways & smell the Petunias. (& if I lose our little Contest, heck, I've already got the Fridge cleaned out & a Rough Draft a-formin' for "The Way I Bowl"...)

It's Gonna Be Right Down your Alley, Amigo!

Happy Trails,
Stan