Stan, this isn't anything like the Divinyls' song. that's simple but lyrical regardless of its theme. this is just rank. and it's not about "nice", it's about writing something with either creative merit or commercial potential. something like Pass the Buck may be "nice" but it's far from lyrical. but hey, that's your style, my comments won't change that. nevertheless I commented on this because like the one about your testical it's just painful to read.


Nashville demos etc:

https://www.soundclick.com/bands3/default.cfm?bandID=431939

other demos:

https://soundcloud.com/wabash-cannibal

Amazon Kindle books by Robert George you may enjoy:

1) Americana

2) Teenage Graceland

3) The Will to Be

4) Fort Mystery

5) Wheel Sea

6) My One True Love