HiDee Bro Lyle!

Yep, I got a Head-Melody every time, tho I confess to Enormously Crammed Lines,time-to-time, on Comedic Stuff. (Sotto Voce Narration bails me out 50% of the time, the other half I get whomped by my Usual Comedic Collaborator, Bill Dudley, & do a Rewrite On-Da-Spot to His Music Track.)

Bill's even More Sarcastic-Sardonic than I am..Quelle Miracle..so if it Ain't Workin' I get That LOOK followed by "You're NOT gonna try to fit ALL THAT into that Line, ARE You?" & I follow with The Truth "I wrote that in a Hurry..lemmie see what I can come up with!"

That "Life, Liberty" bit would fer-sure be Narrated to The Audience as "an Aside"..(with the Melody On-Hold)..to work for a Laugh Line.

I'm glad ya enjoyed the Ditty..it's hard explaining My Stuff to Humorless People/I'm admittedly shorter-on-patience now that I'm approaching Elederly-Dom/have YET to score any Major Cuts with Big Artists so I can grow An Ego.

But I think I can still recognize Formulaic Crap when I see it.
I'm at the Age where Fawning Homilies get met with lotsa Skepticism, and guess I'm penning more in the Mode of an Older-Mark-Twain than a Younger Shania... ;-)>

And...I'm still in this for The Fun. (Gave up on The Money YEARS ago..helped me stay Sane~!)

Thanks for the Kind Male Support...(No Pun Intended...Honest!)

Big Guy-Hug
Stan