Don't know what half the referances here are Jean but like it anyway.
I do wonder how this would go if it opened with the sent a letter to a jewish friend, then went on to comment on all the stuuff you have in the bulk . And then went back to the reply for the outro.
I think that would give some more punch to it and beat what I ffelt was a jump right in opener.
Regards.
Graham

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