Jean,

I liked this. It has a rhythm and cadence all its own. For additional ideas I would suggest writing songs about all those things they've make movies and tv shows and children's religious books about -- you know, Garden of Eden, Noah and his Ark, the events leading up to the Burning Bush, etc. These are common and much more widely known references, as opposed to stuff like, "Offertory" -- whassup with that?

And have it all written, of course, in your very witty and humorous style. Lots of fodder here.


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Best Regards and Aloha,

Charlie
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Best Regards and Aloha,

Charlie