Jean, quite a nice way to take a laughing jab at some of the pomp and circumstance known to some particular sects.
I agree the Psalms don't seem poetical or lyrical to me, but King David was called the "sweet Psalmist of Israel" and that title has never changed. It has kindled a curiosity in me as to the why of such a title when the Psalms we read aren't always so sweet. Some of them are quite prayerful, pleading and outright desparate. Don't see what would be considered sweet about those. I hope to one day, understand why the Psalms are considered such great "hymns". Maybe in your research you'll find some clue and make me wiser?
I find no nits for this. And since you've said your humorous songs run on the up tempo there wouldn't be a time problem I'm sure. Very nicely written.
Bobbie's idea about self-righteous folks does seem like fodder for another song or two or three. That was neat the way she said, their halo's on too tight. Ha
Anyway, good luck with the CD of humorous religious flavored songs.

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