Dear Jean:

Somehow the word eschew sounds like someone sneezing -- to which most might say, "God Bless You".

I think the lyric is very clever, but I'm not at all sure any of the staunch catholics I know would applaud it. The phrase "Your Music Stinks" may be construed as not funny, but offensive.

Personally, religion and politics are two subjects I usually try to avoid commenting on.

If you haven't already done so, perhaps, you should take a short poll among your peers for more feedback.

Good luck with your writing.

Sincerely,

Marian