[VERSE 1]
When we parted ways, that was long overdue.
All we did was argue, there was no me and you.
Years went by ,I found new love and moved on with my life.
I quickly forgot you, and all the endless strife

So first of all, this is so dull and unpoetic, and not a single good line in it.

All your trying to do with it is get to yourr chorus.

Songs ate like women they need foreplay.

Its not a bad opening line, because it gets right to it, you know what happened.

But its just so far and away from good writing.

Hope that helps

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