Originally Posted by Kay-lynn Carew
Why couldn’t you love me! except in my dreams?


Why must I be asleep! to see what might have bean?<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<been
"bean" is just a prompt telling SUNO to slant to dreams.

Why couldnt you ever love me! out in the light of day.<<<<<<<<<<<<take out the word "ever" it's not needed
For me, not necessary, but "ever" adds a touch of extra aingst that I like. Disagree?

Why must I dream, to feel you care for me this way<<<<<<<<<<<<why must I dream, to feel you love me this way
Yep. Your suggestion is clearly better. Thank you.