Originally Posted by texritter
Hay Marty

I think there is a few places in the first two verses you could trim it down a bit, Can't fault you cuz I seam to do the same thing.

But her you go,

Years went by, I moved on with my life
Forgot about you, and all the endless strife

Then the dreams came, out of the blue
Been year since I'd even thought of you

In verse three, I know you're playing off a prayer but I might think it should be (My heart to keep)
Also I would think that she would be looking forward to the dreams not trying to keep them from coming. JMO
After all the last line of your chorus is, Why do I have to dream, to feel you love me this way?

Good Luck
Tex

Thanks for your input Tex.
Am gonna be going back to the song, on and off, over the next few weeks.
Will try out some of your suggestions.

Marty

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