Except In My Dreams

Re: Except In My Dreams texritter #1212216 12/27/25 08:56 PM
Joined: Aug 2007 Posts: 7,124 Likes: 87 Texas Sunset Poet OP Top 40 Poster
OP Sunset Poet Top 40 Poster Joined: Aug 2007 Posts: 7,124 Likes: 87 Texas	Originally Posted by texritter Marty[/quote I find that all the other verses are a AABB rhyme scheme and your 3rd verse is a five line verse. Making it an AABCC rhyme scheme. I do not think it's a bad line at all and I can see how you would like to fit it in. As far as (BEAN) and (BEEN) you've got it in your chorus and it wouldn't hurt to have your chorus a different rhyme scheme than your verses. Bean to a listener doesn't hit right, maybe some might not hear that it just hit's my ears wrong. Good Luck Thanks Tex. I'll go back and look at it. https://soundcloud.com/sunset-poet-of-texas

Entire Thread
Subject	Posted By	Posted
Except In My Dreams	Sunset Poet	12/27/25 03:07 AM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Kay-lynn Carew	12/27/25 03:43 AM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Kay-lynn Carew	12/27/25 03:47 AM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Sunset Poet	12/27/25 04:15 AM
Re: Except In My Dreams	bennash	12/27/25 06:12 AM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Sunset Poet	12/27/25 01:56 PM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Sunset Poet	12/27/25 05:14 PM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Sunset Poet	12/27/25 10:01 PM
Re: Except In My Dreams	texritter	12/27/25 10:52 PM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Sunset Poet	12/28/25 12:31 AM
Re: Except In My Dreams	texritter	12/28/25 12:50 AM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Sunset Poet	12/28/25 12:56 AM
Re: Except In My Dreams	John Voorpostel	12/27/25 11:08 PM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Sunset Poet	12/28/25 12:34 AM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Sunset Poet	12/28/25 12:53 AM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Kay-lynn Carew	12/28/25 12:35 AM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Sunset Poet	12/28/25 12:39 AM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Kay-lynn Carew	12/28/25 12:38 AM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Sunset Poet	12/28/25 12:43 AM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Kay-lynn Carew	12/28/25 12:53 AM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Sunset Poet	12/28/25 12:56 AM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Kay-lynn Carew	12/28/25 01:01 AM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Sunset Poet	12/28/25 04:56 PM
Re: Except In My Dreams	John Voorpostel	12/28/25 05:21 PM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Sunset Poet	12/28/25 05:34 PM
Re: Except In My Dreams	texritter	12/28/25 07:51 PM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Sunset Poet	12/28/25 07:56 PM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Sunset Poet	12/29/25 01:27 PM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Sunset Poet	12/31/25 01:19 AM
Re: Except In My Dreams	bennash	12/31/25 01:37 PM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Sunset Poet	12/31/25 01:46 PM
Re: Except In My Dreams	bennash	12/31/25 01:59 PM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Sunset Poet	12/31/25 02:10 PM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Sunset Poet	12/31/25 01:32 PM
Re: Except In My Dreams	bennash	12/31/25 02:14 PM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Sunset Poet	12/31/25 02:18 PM
Re: Except In My Dreams	bennash	12/31/25 05:39 PM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Sunset Poet	12/31/25 05:58 PM
Re: Except In My Dreams	John Voorpostel	12/31/25 03:03 PM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Kay-lynn Carew	12/31/25 03:48 PM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Sunset Poet	01/05/26 07:35 PM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Kay-lynn Carew	01/08/26 11:49 PM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Bill Draper	01/08/26 11:36 PM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Sunset Poet	01/09/26 12:50 PM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Fdemetrio	01/08/26 11:52 PM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Fdemetrio	05/18/26 04:06 AM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Sunset Poet	05/18/26 12:01 PM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Fdemetrio	05/18/26 12:45 PM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Sunset Poet	05/18/26 12:47 PM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Fdemetrio	05/18/26 01:01 PM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Sunset Poet	05/18/26 01:10 PM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Fdemetrio	05/18/26 01:14 PM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Sunset Poet	05/18/26 01:37 PM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Fdemetrio	05/18/26 01:44 PM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Sunset Poet	05/18/26 02:09 PM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Fdemetrio	05/18/26 02:42 PM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Sunset Poet	05/18/26 04:55 PM
Re: Except In My Dreams	bennash	05/18/26 03:12 PM
Re: Except In My Dreams	bennash	05/18/26 04:59 PM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Sunset Poet	05/18/26 05:05 PM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Fdemetrio	05/18/26 05:37 PM
Re: Except In My Dreams	bennash	05/21/26 03:04 AM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Fdemetrio	05/18/26 05:51 PM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Sunset Poet	05/18/26 05:57 PM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Fdemetrio	05/18/26 06:14 PM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Sunset Poet	05/19/26 12:42 AM
Re: Except In My Dreams	bennash	05/18/26 10:28 PM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Fdemetrio	05/19/26 01:27 AM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Fdemetrio	05/19/26 01:35 AM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Sunset Poet	05/19/26 01:45 AM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Fdemetrio	05/19/26 01:54 AM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Sunset Poet	05/19/26 02:31 AM
Re: Except In My Dreams	Fdemetrio	05/19/26 02:44 AM

Moderated by E Swartz, Gary E. Andrews, John Lawrence Schick

Hop To

Link Copied to Clipboard

Support Just Plain Folks

We would like to keep the membership in Just Plain Folks FREE! Your donation helps support the many programs we offer including Road Trips and the Music Awards.

Newest Members

KyleCrawford, LukeMeyers, KimBilbrew, AdamSadowski, NicoleRoss
21,479 Registered Users

Forum Statistics

Forums118

Topics128,882

Posts1,185,181

Members21,479

Most Online236,505
Jul 1st, 2026

Just Plain Quotes

"Learn the "tried and true" rules, then break them with premeditated malice!" -Brian Austin Whitney

Today's Birthdays

Jody Whitesides (2026)

JPF Home Page Forums Lyric and MP3 Feedback A.I. Assisted Music Forum Except In My Dreams