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RT .23
by bennash - 05/17/26 03:00 PM
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HER TOWN
by Fdemetrio - 05/14/26 10:26 AM
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by bennash - 05/14/26 10:03 AM
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by Fdemetrio - 05/13/26 06:53 PM
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I find that all the other verses are a AABB rhyme scheme and your 3rd verse is a five line verse. Making it an AABCC rhyme scheme. I do not think it's a bad line at all and I can see how you would like to fit it in. As far as (BEAN) and (BEEN) you've got it in your chorus and it wouldn't hurt to have your chorus a different rhyme scheme than your verses. Bean to a listener doesn't hit right, maybe some might not hear that it just hit's my ears wrong.
Good Luck Thanks Tex. I'll go back and look at it.
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