Originally Posted by Sunset Poet
The verse wasn't an attempt to win a Nobel Prize.
It described a situation and a state of mind...reasonably well.

You critique style is...


Your sister is ugly.
She could be pretty.
But she's ugly.


That's empty and goes nowhere.
It just serves the purpose of delivering a diminishing insult.

You put a song up and I gave it a genuine critique.
You are thin skinned, and these empty insults are your reflexive coping mechanism.

Don't expect an adult to take it seriously.

Gotta go

But dont you think to give a harsh, genuine critique, you should be better at writing thsn this, piece?

I mean how do you know,what's good if you haven't written good?

Last edited by Fdemetrio; 1 hour ago.