Originally Posted by Sunset Poet
All The Hell That Left With You (final salute to an EX)

Hi Marty,

This has a lot of flavor you tend to find on the Texas Music Scene. Coincidence? I think not. Do you have the lyrics for this. I was able to catch most of them listening but I'd like to read them regardless. Exes can be a source of great inspiration. My latest release "There's A Man In My Life" is based on my cheating first wife. That lingering suspicion that lies in the quiet of a love going wrong. I thought Suno did a great job with the musical bridge on your song. Sometimes it comes up with some pretty cool stuff. I found this song reminiscent of Wade Bowen and Randy Rogers "Hold My Beer" in the overall scope of it. Not the lyric. But the melody for sure. If I had to make any suggestion to you about your writing style, I would suggest that you look more to the imagery and perhaps inner rhymes of your writes. You express well. But try to say the same thing in a different way. I think you'll be amazed with a little practice where it takes you lyrically. By inner rhymes, I mean something along the lines of this example "That lake swing thrill and a kiss so real". Using "lake swing thrill" as another way to describe swinging out on a rope into the water. "Thrill, and Real" are the inner rhymes. It gives vocal changeup in the lyric, chorus, bridge or the tag even so that it doesn't have the same delivery throughout. Just a few light suggestions you might tinker with in future projects. Regards!