Originally Posted by floyd jane
Kimberly,

Ricki hit on all the places that I thought could use tweaks.
The "deceive" in particular. Everything else about the song really fits the style of song that it is.

It would be PERFECT for one of those teenage-valley-girl-high-school movies! They always have a song like this when things are getting frantic...

A very fun song. A terrific sound.

floyd


Thanks so much for listening, it is very helpful to us before we do some tweaks to know what works and what does not and I agree some of those words need trimming and changing...thanks for the very kind comments
Kim

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