Kimberly, The only tweak it needs is on the volume knob. It blew my headphones off my head. Once I got the volume turned down to 1 and my headphones back on I listened to the song. Not my kind of music but it was very well done. Songs like these people aren't looking for any revelations or great thoughts, and your lyrics are fine anyway. You can start nitpicking lyrics and it will never end. I see not a thing wrong with these lyrics or the music (well, except for the volume). Good luck ahead with it.

Last edited by Dan Sullivan; 02/20/14 08:54 PM.

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