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Kimberly,
Ricki hit on all the places that I thought could use tweaks.
The "deceive" in particular. Everything else about the song really fits the style of song that it is.
It would be PERFECT for one of those teenage-valley-girl-high-school movies! They always have a song like this when things are getting frantic...
A very fun song. A terrific sound.
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