Outstanding job so far folks. For those who haven't weighed in yet, please don't worry about being wrong or that you aren't experienced etc. This is a learning session on how to critique a lyric and everyone has to start somewhere. Even if it's just a few observations or things you like or dislike, just add the "why" you like it or what might work better and you're there. Some really outstanding ones above!

Brian


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