Hey Ms. Kim, thanks for giving this your time!

I looked over your suggs, great crit! I appreciate it.

If the steam fade from a mirror, you can't read the message. You'd be amazed at what you can write on a foggy mirror.

I changed toweling off to towel in hand, I wasn't thinking about the poor singer, yes, too difficult.

I don't think sweating is so much gra[hic as it is suggestive, which plays with the theme of the song. imo

Anyway...thanks so much for going through this, I appreciate it.


Caroline


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