Caroline, love the hook...not too sure about the story...it feels complicated...when i saw the hook and that it was a Trace style song i thought of another great one word title song he did of a Jeffrey Steele song "Speed", i think that song is way cool, in fact i do it in my solo act. You may be able to draw some insight from it, although that is about getting away from a girl, not gettin' busy with her smile i will check back in with ya on this cos i LOVE the hook. see ya...mj