Droptine,
I'm glad that I read a comment further down about why you wrote this song. This explained every aspect of it totally to me once I started listening to it. The story was superb and well stated lyrically. The music was excellent. You do have a lovely voice as a folk artist in my opinion.. I would add a touch of reverb and maybe a ash of delay but not alot. Beautiful song!!!
Good Luck,
BOB



MUSKIE