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Bayside
by Gary E. Andrews - 10/19/26 09:48 PM
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Just a work tape. Never did get around to full-demo. All comments and suggestions welcome. The Wardencopyright 2007 Droptinehttp://soundclick.com/share?songid=7999706V1 Wakin' up in your prison cell-maybe word it as... no longer a home but a prison cell, you make coffee for the warden, then it will be clearer it is about a marrige..which I understood, but I can see how it could confuse.Makin' coffee for The Warden Another day in your living hell Across the table sits The Warden Silent lips and painted smile You gently kiss goodbye The Warden- maybe say it as you give a goodbye kiss to the wardenCHORUS Close your eyes and you're in my arms again Resting peacefully and safe until the enduntil the end is not quite clear as to what this means, maybe say, to be in a loveless marriage is a sin, a pretty bird is what you will be, the day he sets you free?? or the day you break freeA pretty bird is what you'll be The day he sets you free- I just wonder why HE is the one who decides if she goes free, V2 Bread and water meet your simple needs So supplies The Warden And it's his voice that you must heed Thus dictates The Warden CHORUS BRIDGE Your gilded cage is now ugly, tarnished red As you lay cringing from his touch beneath your bed You lift your wings to leave Tonight he set you free- because tonight you broke free... give her some power..Child close your eyes and you're in my arms again- the child is confusing, say girl...Resting peacefully and safe, it never ends A pretty bird is what I see! The Father's set you free
a very nice vocal and melody, you just may want to make the meaning a bit more clear. good luck:) Kim
Last edited by Kimberlyinnc; 08/29/09 04:37 PM.
*Always open to collaborations on my lyrics.. with singers and musicians, but PLEASE contact me before putting work into one--in case someone else has it..thanks!!** BMI Member All Rights Reserved http://www.littleikepublishing.com Email for Song Business Only littleikeproductions@hotmail.com
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