Droptine;

I won't have a chance to listen to this until tonight, I only got to quickly read the lyrics.
I like the jail metaphor, you had me believing you were actually talking to the warden. About half way through I realized it was a spouse, I thought it was a man describing his wife. I finally realized it was a women's pov. Not as clear as it could be but I like the way you had my brain snaking around like that. I agree with Kevin, I'd like to know more about who's waiting outside!
I'll listen tonight.

Steve