Hey Mark,
I'm a "Newbie", posted my first song on JPF today! This is a very cool song, awesome guitar solo at the end. Really like the"Shutters off my Eyes" line. I think the song would be stronger and have more impact if you lift the vocals and push them a little harder from the middle of the song to the end. The same way you push those awesome riffs at the end. Waaaay cool song!

Droptine