Hey Ande

For once I find myself on Couch Grouches side lol... No offense Robert..

The music is great and the melody definitly hooks you right in, but the lyric is watered down whiskey... It hits ya pretty good with the chorus, but the story is one that doesn't stand out to me as original or even well laid out.. I've written a couple in this theme, and I feel that it needs more punch... the hook's actually really good.. and yes I like the chorus, but the verses are really lacking in imagination...
Derek


All the worlds a song and all the people Singers

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