Howdy Wy...GREAT to see you on here commenting. You have been missed. I understand that part of your absence has been due to some great stuff you have going on! Please keep us posted. Your compatriots here wanna share in your ongoing good news. How have you been doing...besides busy?

On that line you are questioning..perhaps "The other hammered her heart
Till his words tore her apart?"

Those are some excellent suggestions for the bridge. I may use them. Thanks for taking time to drop by on this one..and for lending your always-welcome insights and ideas. Hope the concert happens as slated and that it brings attention to and some solutions for such a widespread problem.

Bobbie

They'll tell you success in the music biz is all about who you know...but the truth is...it's about who knows you.

Gallup 'n Dawg Music