Bobbie I love this and what a worthy cause! I hope the concert is a huge success. So sorry to know this has touched your life as well. I did think the chorus could use a bit more of explanation of her sad plight. Since there are two distinct kinds of abuse (physical/mental) I had thought of something like this:
One RAISED his hand to prove he was a man
The other BROKE HER WITH WORDS
Til she GOT HER FILL OF HURT

I saw the bridge as being very powerful since it seems to be expressing what she must have been thinking and feeling.
Good luck with this Bobbie! [Linked Image] [Linked Image]