Hi again Mz Kaley,

Glad you caught that pattern thing in the chorus. That really was what I was going after there, the cyclical nature of this.

I can meter this correctly with OR without that word gray. I tend to use grEy..<G> simply an oddity of mine. I think it is sort of the British spelling of the word and I happen to think it 'looks' more elegant, but who cares in a lyric that someone will only HEAR..<G>

Thanks so much, Kaley.

Bobbie


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