In my mind. B.G..the chorus..is perfect and fits to a T...abuse... I think folks that have felt abuse whether it be emotional or physical.....will relate to both the chorus..
and the verses...

the 6th line of the 2nd verse..seems
to trip me a bit...toward the end..
but i'm not hearing the music that's in your mind...so it may be a perfect fit...B.G.

anycase..

this is strong..and well written..
and will be Perfect your Project..
Best of Luck with it...

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