Howdy Mz Kaley,

Sure glad you like the chorus as is. I am sure it can be improved, however. I was hoping that folks who have experienced either or both kinds of abuse will find something in this that feels relevant to them. I think/hope if you put emphasis on the words, JOB, FRIENDS, HER and PLACE, you will get a better sense of how that line meters out (at least for me). May not be perfect, but I think a composer can make it work..if not, they can change it.

Thanks for your support on this project. It should be an interesting one.

Bobbie

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