Hey there Bobbieo,

A wonderful treatment of a very sad and serious subject. No one tells a story like this better than someone who's experienced it first hand.

Now, to beat the dead horse LOL. The chorus is really well written basically, but my confusion had to do with ONE and then THE OTHER. When you mention that "one grey day she just walked away," it almost gave the impression that she was leaving two people at the same time. I guess I'm thinking that there needs to be a little clarification that there were two distinct abusive people. Did she leave BOTH abusers on separate "grey days" and each time did she leave her car in the parking lot? As you have it, it seems a tad confusing.

Other than that, I think you have handled this matter in a very sensitive and level-headed way, which I imagine is rather difficult given the circumstances.

Quite nicely done.

Greg

If you don't eat your meat, you can't have any pudding.