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Thanks for checking back in here. It means a lot that you think this song is a winner. And thanks for your thoughts about the guitar...I wish I had gotten a better sound for it.

I didn't know what to expect from this song (I just finished the lyrics last week) so I hadn't thought about developing it...I just thought it would be fun to record and post for feedback and use it to improve. But if it's worth pitching, I'd take a look at reworking it.

I don't remember if I mentioned this before, but my wife listened to some of your songs and when she found out you weren't rich and famous she told me if you hadn't made it with your songs, I had no chance! But I'd still like to get a song or two at that level so I can take my shot.

Mark

"In theory, theory and practice are the same. In practice, they are not."
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